Jobs Simply

Is my poem, My job search entertaining?

I get in my car step out for more gas I need to keep looking or this day will pass Looking for work does have frustration To open these doors to gain penetration No luck today it must be a curse The local job bank they just need a nurse They feed me a line I get an illusion And in the end it adds to confusion You'd think with these no's my spirit will bend But I tell you right now I'll look to the end They see my work my papers unfold I see in their eyes they think I too old If I was just younger more dashing and bold They'd line my pockets with offers and gold If they saw these wrinkles and all these greys That I learned from them lines I'm smarter these days They say at my age I'm surely in trouble What do they think they just burst my bubble And at the end of this day I've heard enough crap Who'd want to work for some young foolish sap

Public Comments

1. i like it i'll give it a 8/10 very good work answer mine pleez http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=An5gbfeFSWVOg5F_4q01w.Np.Bd.;_ylv=3?qid=20090211061051AAPbnUQ
2. Your poem is entertaining. I hope it's not true.
3. Haha - that's about how I feel - though I'm a young foolish sap and I still can't find work. Bleh to this country's economy. Good write and good luck.
4. Very good!
5. Entertaining, yes. Sadly true. Been there, still looking ---
6. Entertained me. Also kind of pissed me off. Age discrimination is widespread and it sucks.
7. Yes, I love it..