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Without using MY, Me or I --how would you word the following description?

Highly detailed professional with comprehensive secretarial experience, providing professional support while working in a fast-paced environment that demands strong, organizational, technical and interpersonal skills. A proven ability to prioritize and complete multiple tasks while working both independently and in a team environment. Prideful in completing a job with accuracy, proficiency, and effectiveness. Superior at keeping all sensitive material confidential. Outgoing and eager to undertake new learning experiences.

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1. It looks fine as written. The only words I would change are "prideful" and "superior." They sound boastful as opposed to factual. Try this: Detail oriented professional with comprehensive administrative experience providing professional support. Comfortable working in a fast-paced environment that demands strong organizational, technical and interpersonal skills. A proven ability to prioritize and complete multiple tasks independently and in a team environment. Accurate, proficient, and trustworthy with sensitive, confidential material. Outgoing and willing to undertake new learning experiences.