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Is the following CV acceptable?

I'm about to start handing out my CV (Curriculum Vitae) - at least I hope so. It's my first attempt at a CV, helped by scraps found in the farthest reaches of the internet. I would like people's opinions on what could be changed and what can stay. Everyone's answer is greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance. CV: http://ramejkis.com/misc/6/CVMINE.doc (It's not a virus. If you're still worried, don't feel obliged to help :))

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1. Hi There, Your question caught my attention because I had to submit my CV for my Graduate level class in Educational Administration. A few things I hope I can point out to you, and I hope you don't take this negatively. Just some construction criticism. 1. Remove the actual grades or marks from your CV. Add in the anticipated date you hope to get your degree, and the type of degree you plan to get. 2. The remaining portions are too wordy in paragraph form. Use bulleted fragments and phrases instead 3. Include any special honors or awards you might have received. Include any community service and volunteering you might have done. You are welcome to email me at sharonf226@yahoo.com and I can send you a copy of my newly revised CV.