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I would be thankful if somebody would correct my letter…. Please?

Respected Sir, Thanks for the opportunity to work with your esteemed organization through offering me the job - Management executive. I would be thankful if I get a clarification from you before I join. I am presently employed and getting a salary of Rs.12,000 in my present work. This was informed during the telephonic interview conducted first and the personal interview. It was reconfirmed by you during the final clarification of my consent to join. And also I have quoted my expected salary of Rs.15, 000 to 20,000 during all my communication with you. Its surprise to me that you have sent the offering letter with the salary of what I am presently getting. The job needs a full time working person and relocation of stay. Hence It is not meaningful to me to get a job with relocation with the same salary and also I think It is not sufficient to a person having 5 years experience. Hence I would like to know weather there is any possibility of revising my salary. I hope you will send me a favorable reply.

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1. i have changed your letter to the text below: Dear Sir, Thank you for the opportunity to work with your esteemed organization as a Management executive. Please can I get clarification from you before I join. I am presently employed and getting a salary of Rs.12,000 in my present job.. This was stated during the telephone interview conducted first and the personal interview. It was reconfirmed by you during the final clarification of my consent to join. Also, I have quoted my expected salary of Rs.15, 000 to 20,000 during all my communication with you. I am suprised that you have sent the offer letter with the salary of what I am presently getting. The job needs a full time working person and relocation of stay. I think the salary is not sufficient to a person having 5 years experience. Hence I would like to know whether there is any possibility of revising my salary. I hope you will send me a favorable reply. regards X